Oliver Persuasive writing

i am leaning about Persuasive writing 

My opinion is that schools should not allow scooters at morning tea and lunch time.

Scooters are dangerous. they should be banned from children on scooters

but they are enjoyable to play on but very dangerous at the same time . and the rider can hurt him or herself or the people watching.

I think that children that are on scooters can take over the playground and the scooters need lots of room to ride on can take away fun from children

And can quickly can knock over small children that are playing  with friends

Scooter ring is a dangerous sport and and can hurt kids and adults .

Often kids do not wear safety gear because they can’t not bothered or it might take too long to put it on.  Some kids can find out new tricks which I think that children should be banned from scooter ring at playtime and lunchtime.

calendar art

we are bowing calendar art for our work it be for we bid  our work we had to do a draft then we can do our calendar art

chuck the chicken

I would like feed back for my wiring there may be some mistakes in my wiring

I did not know that toy cows could fly…..  until one flew through the sky!

Yesterday we played chuck the chicken. in the first round I was the catcher it was so enjoyable but the second round was not fun because i the way i was chucking the chicken properly.

But we were not chucking a chicken It was a toy cow. kiwi can was

Fun but how was I good at that game? but I wonder If we'll play It again? but then we got another instruction so one person will be told to chuck the chicken then they will chuck the chicken one person will run in an circle then the person beside him will run.

But I will tell you how to play the game. So you split your team so one part of your team will be chucking the chicken and one part of the team will be catching

the chicken. The other team has to pass the chicken around the circle but when you get told to chuck the chicken then you chuck the chicken.

Popcorn Capacity

In maths we are learning about capacity we used popcorn to find out the capacity of a glass first we how many spoonfuls of popcorn cereals it took to fill a glass cup i guessed 16 it actually took  20 spoonfuls next we popped the popcorn  the on the oven we had to  guest how much  popcorn will fill up the cup i guessed 16 the capacity of popcorn in the cup was 12 spoonfuls.

Inventing a Paralympic Sport

If I was to invent a sport I would call it,  'Paralympic Dodge Ball '.

This is when you have a ball and you hit it with your hands and make it hit their legs.

If you are hit on your legs you are out. But by the next round you are back in the game. 

If they are blind they will have an electronic sensor to guide them around. If they are deaf it would be OK to play the game.

If the Athlete can not run or walk they will be given metal legs to help them.

Capacity and Volume

in maths we are learning about capacity and volume capacity is how much the container can hold volume is how much is in that container at the time we filled different containers with rice and water.

Paralympic funraiseing

If I was to help fun raise money for the Paralympics, I would have a school garage sale. I would make everyone at school bring object they never used and don't need anymore, but it has to be good quality stuff. Then advertise it with signs in the community for people to come.

My other idea is cleaning up back yards
for the elderly.
Like:
mowing the lawns
weeding
raking up leaves

who to choose

If I was asked to compete in a tandem cycling event and I had to elect one person to compete with me will choose my dad because he is a cyclist  and because i can trust him. he helps me when i need him  and because he buys me stuff and because he is my dad.

I choose Richie mc caw because he is a role model to  new zeland

Olympic uniform

My favorite uniform for the Olympic is 2004 because it is black and because it has a silver fern. because they are representing new zealand

My second favorite uniform is 2012  because i look smart and because it has the symbol and i like it because show the shoes because it might be sandals or normal shoes

my third favorite uniform is 2008 but it my favorite because it has my favorite color green and the silver fern is black and white

This animation is about stopping bullying. Its one boy who loses his money to a bully, then a hero comes and helps him stand up to the bully and they become friends. They show a teacher and the bully is happy. The bully gives the boy his money back. We learned to change the html code when embedding it on our blog, so it plays like a movie… To duplicate slides with writing, so they stay long enough to read… To make sure we don’t breach copyright… How to use the toolbar in google slides.

Scott Curry is in the rugby sevens he plays guitar and he loves relaxing  and he is a natural  and he likes
playing rugby  and he like golf

The crowd were clapping and cheering. Then circles came out of the sky! Two characters were chasing a circle. They were having fun then they met on a mountain and they hit each other and they  became friends.then  they did a secret handshake

The cheeky Magpie

I made this slide show for my learning I hope I can get 20 comments

One time i was on a paper airplane i was  so happy out off my mind my heart was pumping fast as anything  I was wating to get to the ground i wonder if I was going to be stuck in space and I went back to the ground then i went my best friend home

paper aeroplane

One time i was on a paper airplane i was  so happy out off my mind my heart was pumping fast as anything  I was wating to get to the ground i wonder if I was going to be stuck in space and I went back to the ground then i went my best friend home

tessllation

  

In the Trenches

Depth charges  blow up...  because they were keeping Germans away ….I wonder  how

many dead bodies were there? 

Guns blow... Because they want to win the war... I wonder how many limitless men came back from warfare?

Rats consume flesh… because they're are hungering to eat... I wonder how many multiple rats had nutrition?

Whale oil put on bodies… Because they were frosting to death…. I wonder if they lived?