Hi my name is Kurtis and i am year 6 boy at St.Bernadette's School. I like the way you put in lots of detail into your work by going around the outline of your drawing. I also like how you put fantastic drawing in your work they look really cool. What I think you could do next time is put a bigger explanation under your photo. I am excited to see more of you hard work.
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Hey Ollie, I like how you put those cool patterns you put on the circle. Maybe you could put more information but keep It ,great job. Goodbye
ReplyDeletethank you Levi for the comment
DeleteHey Ollie, I like how you put those cool patterns you put on the circle. Maybe you could put more information but keep It ,great job. Goodbye
ReplyDeleteHi ollie I really like how you made alot of dirent patens and used alot of diffrent colors
ReplyDeletethank you Connie
DeleteHi my name is Kurtis and i am year 6 boy at St.Bernadette's School. I like the way you put in lots of detail into your work by going around the outline of your drawing. I also like how you put fantastic drawing in your work they look really cool. What I think you could do next time is put a bigger explanation under your photo. I am excited to see more of you hard work.
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