i am leaning about Persuasive writing
My opinion is that schools should not allow scooters at morning tea and lunch time.
Scooters are dangerous. they should be banned from children on scooters
but they are enjoyable to play on but very dangerous at the same time . and the rider can hurt him or herself or the people watching.
I think that children that are on scooters can take over the playground and the scooters need lots of room to ride on can take away fun from children
And can quickly can knock over small children that are playing with friends
Scooter ring is a dangerous sport and and can hurt kids and adults .
Often kids do not wear safety gear because they can’t not bothered or it might take too long to put it on. Some kids can find out new tricks which I think that children should be banned from scooter ring at playtime and lunchtime.
