Alarm call
The monster saw something then he stopped
As the monster was walking through the hall he saw a cat o no he thought to himself . he hoped not to wake it up then….
He took a step on a loose floorboard then A loud creek echoed through the hall the kitten hopped up. Then the kitten took a long hard stare at the monster the monster solely worked back. he stood on another loose floorboard creek.
The kitten chased the monster and attacked him. The monster screamed the kitten hit the monster . He yelled the monster was running away but the kitten was in hot pursuit. the kitten got him but the monster was relentless and got away
From there on in the monster never came back
The end
we made this story about the kitten story on google docs for writing time . We were given a picture and had to include a twist in our story.
i hope you liked it
Hi there Oliver
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jade F and I will be working with your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme this summer break.
Fantastic job on your writing, I thought it was very funny how a kitten was chasing a monster for waking it up. How can something small and cute chase after a big green monster? I can picture this story being a picture book or a comic. Maybe you could add images to show the audience what the characters in your writing look like so they can get a better picture!
I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here.Copy the link below into your URL bar
https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!
Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer!
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Jade F :)